Poetry; Love Rose

I love poems. Both writing and reading them that is.
Here is my 'rose' themed poem. Written as an alliterative love poem on my course.

'Rose Thorns Pierce Hearts'

Your beauty eludes me totally.
Your scent overpowers me sensually.
Your perfect petals are like 
butterflies wings.

Grouped in a huddle

like an awkward cuddle.

Rusty red, pretty pink

or for forever; frosty white.

Your touch tickles my cheeks

as I hold back a sneeze; ‘Piriteze'

medication muddles my love.

I am soft as a silk pillow in your embrace.

You’re as sickly as strawberry 'Roses'.